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[yea!]

Thanks a lot Analog. I appreciate the crit. I'm gonna to do a few more variations based on feedback.

[Trim]

just a suggestion, mayb u should combine "everything today," together. mayb you also can remove "is". thought it could read and sound better this way anyway its a great job. i've been playing around with typefaces recently too!

any crit on this? i'm somewhat set on the type just wondering about readability issues / cornyness

[the Repeater]

Font choice is ehhhhh and remove 'to some extent' and commas.

[yea!]

what does "ehhhhh" mean besides being a comment referring to your personal preference?

I appreciate the advice Trim.

others:

only change i somewhat like, aside from the rag shape:

[mr fluffernutter]

REMOVE THE 'EVERYTHING' (7)

TODAY IS THE REFLECTION OF SOMETHING ELSE

THAT'S SOME DEEP SHIT.

also Analog is right... a lot of people use wishy washy statements in their copy and it makes them look weak and boring. you need to come up with something and fucking stick to it as if you were born with it

yeah...

[yea!]

i completely agree. i've got it from here, much thanks homies.

[FunkyFrenchy]

really nice.

but try not to play to much with writing up side down etc... it's starts to become tricky to read. especially for non english people.

[thaiison]

amazing jebeebus, i could definitely see that on my wall. get at me if you ever plan to sell some!

[redX]

you should only invert the letters on the word "reflection" and leave the rest alone, it's just really hard to read and i think you would just as well get your point across

[Trim]

Hey guys, please give some feedbacks on my logo. Its for a campaign/branding that i created entitled "Designer on the Loose" for my upcoming project.

Which one you guys would prefer?

Many thanks in advance

[chubby]

i prefer the 2nd version

[(10chars)]

brian, im feeling this one out the ones you posted..

[mlproject]

Hey guys, please give some feedbacks on my logo. Its for a campaign/branding that i created entitled "Designer on the Loose" for my upcoming project.

Which one you guys would prefer?

Many thanks in advance

actually, neither. the whole thing is too fragmented - 3 parts. i'd either have it reading with designers dominant or the whole thing as a solid unit. personally, i'd play off 'loose' with an italic, not awkward tracked out letters.

filling in the counters of the O's on the first one jumbles it up even more. i get that maybe you're trying to make them wheels, but with the contrast between your light face on LOOSE and the super bold, counterless O's, it just falls apart.

[U MAD]

the tracking on that is busted. also the "on the" looks like it's about to fall off.

[Trim]

Yeah thanks for the feedbacks man. gonna edit them again.

actually, neither. the whole thing is too fragmented - 3 parts. i'd either have it reading with designers dominant or the whole thing as a solid unit. personally, i'd play off 'loose' with an italic, not awkward tracked out letters.

filling in the counters of the O's on the first one jumbles it up even more. i get that maybe you're trying to make them wheels, but with the contrast between your light face on LOOSE and the super bold, counterless O's, it just falls apart.

[yea!]

working with titles like " _ on the _" or "_ the _" really fucking sucks

but yeah, agreed that there are too many changes. maybe work with 2 changes to start, and as consistent as possible.

[phen3N]

i made these one night after noticing how cartoons are so recognizable by color alone. is it obvious what show each of them is referring to? would they be obvious if i didn't tell you that theyre cartoons?

[home]

i haven't watched cartoons in many a year but i can't pick one. maybe it's the six-pack i had this evening.

[Analog]

Second-from-bottom is TMNT? I have no idea...

[Magsåvningsreserven]

having looked at them solidly for about 5 minutes, i only got 2 and 4.

[redX]

it took me a couple minutes just to figure out how to interpret those images

1, 2 and 4 is what i've got

3 i have no idea unless it's Johnny Bravo or something, but i never knew that that cartoon had any other recognizeable characters apart from Johnny - beavis and butthead? dunno

nice job though!

[AstroWolf]

i think your on to a good idea there, but fuck if i know any of those schemes...

[NatseOklim]

I thought MAYBE 1 was Family Guy.

[billy.]

I saw something pretty similar done with Street Fighter.

Works pretty well if you got sound / animation to back it up.

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[phen3N]

damn, i was hoping they'd be obvious. maybe cartoon was a bad choice of words. anyway theyre:

Family Guy

Simpsons

King of the Hill

Futurama

[NatseOklim]

I think the first 2 work better than the last 2 personally.

[redX]

^ the last one actually was the first one i recognized and only because there is that one asian chick with the full body pink suit.

#1 was really hard imo, because the 1st character is brian and not the main character of the show itself

[DüM]

I recognized Fry right away. the futurama is easiest to me. I like the idea but maybe another setup would help somehow.

[minelee]

I mean I didn't create this, but I don't know where else to post it. I was just wondering what fonts these were?

The only thing I can gather from the white font is that the A and R have slanted terminations and that the whole font was created as capital letters I believe.

Thanks in advance!

[fffffut]

damn, i was hoping they'd be obvious. maybe cartoon was a bad choice of words. anyway theyre:

Family Guy

Simpsons

King of the Hill

Futurama

i got these like immediately

it seemed obvious to me haha