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Got the first part of something I'm writing down, need some people to tell me if it works.

Its really short (for now), 700 words, mostly dialogue. Just throw me a PM if you down.

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i cant believe i missed out on the black linda farrow x raf eyeglasses in black. I'd look like a clown with the ones that are up for preorders now. :(

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i still want those raf x doc marts. fuck fuck fuck. i'm selling myself for those... NOT!

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Yo, I'm reading Their Eyes Were Watching God, and the dialogue is fucking brilliant. The writing is brilliant.

I really shouldn't have Sparknotes'd this book in high school.

I also read bits of Men and Mules, again by Zora Hurston; she has a mastery of dialogue. Mastery. It comes from experience, and just being ingrained in her culture, but christ. I wonder how much you can attribute it to that, or pure literary skill, or anthropological field study. The point of the book is to document black folklore in florida, but its written like literary fiction. Its reflexive. A majority of it is dialogue, but I doubt she was taking notes -- its all hearsay, so she had to fill some of the characters from memory -- which takes skill. These people become her own creation through the dialogue. But aside from dialogue, although reflexive, first person, she only invokes the sense of sight -- observation. Like an anthropologist. Its a conscious decision, because she has mastery of senses as exhibited in Their Eyes Were Watching God. She was being sponsored by a white professor, looking to do some Westernized field study -- Zora played to this, however. She wanted to write something that would sell, but also have scholarly value. She combined her learned passion, anthropology, with her original passion, writing, in Mules and Men. Ok, caffiene tangent off.

She fucking good yo. Inspired as shit, just what I needed.

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Space%20Shuttle.gif

space shuttles don't seem too complicated... all i really wonder though, what's the feeling when the ground starts shaking, agitated with flames and smoke, and pro-(s)pelled, power, technology, explosions of complexions, with all these different lights..

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daddy used to roll me in a blanket, laying on the ground, and pull on one end of it, so i'd spin in the airs :cool:

he was not saying "vroom vroom vroom" though, i think i miss the whole experience... maybe , one day, i'll look back at my youth with a smile, now, i feel totally empty.... AND THAT'S BECAUSE OF YOU!!!

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the "vroom vroom vroom" as the perfect imagery for childhood innocence... well is missing.

that's where the emptiness lay.

echoing cradle!!

edit: i love the word cradle and my new avatar

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My dad used to hold my head up to the showerhead, as if I liked it. I dunno how I remember that, but I know I hated it. I don't know why he would do that,

Dad, the water is going to get to me, just stop blocking it, oh thanks. Oh thanks. Thanks.

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he thought you liked having your head in the toilet bowl as he was flushing too...

your dad always had a "phony" sense of humor

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damn it now that im on a different time zone i dont see all teh good random thought posts til they are afterthoughts, sucks. i wanted to throw in my 2 cents about poptarts then i notice, was posted 17 hours ago, so you cats'll be like 'who the fuck was talking about pop tarts'

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leo, thats also the excuse he used when you almost passed away on the beach, sao paulo, 1998.

do you remember? its really fresh in my brains..

it was mass.

but it was yesterday

TRENDS MOVE FASTER

i'm writing this and i know its already too late :(

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Wow, Kings just keeps getting more predictable and gay. Like super-'mo

so fucking disappointed with this.

don't know what I was expecting...

but his ain't it.

:(

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