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I have chosen to write about business economics and English. My main field is accounts analysis where I want to talk about the methods and theories you can use when you make account analysis and how it is used in a company analysis. After I have explained this point I want to use it as the main point in the assignment, where I analyze two companies: the Irish CRH and the Danish firm RBR. Finally, I want to evaluate CRH’s strategy and see if it’s realistic in proportion to the key figures I have calculated earlier.
I used a chapter in our business economics book where there were calculation methods I could use to calculate the key figures. Beside this chapter I used a book called Annual Accounts and Company Analysis written by JÃ¸rgen Rawn ElkjÃ¦r and Kristian Hjulsager. I also used a calculation list by B&W. When I analyzed the two firms I used the things which I explained. My conclusion on these two analyses is that they both are doing well. Their return degree and profit degree is fantastic and they are in good development.
Finally, I conclude that CRH’s strategy to double their revenue within five years is going well. They had a 46% increase in their revenue from 2004 to 2006.