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Two designs here i whipped up really quick. More for the statement than for the aesthetics.

I know by using a vulgarity i cut out a whole demographic of people that will wear this tee, its what came to me in the middle of my genocide course last semster, i dont really want to change my statement.

Here we go, I was thinking about this being blown up big at the front of the teeshirt.

Or the back with a little logo or design on one of the front breast areas

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This one I was thinking just for the back, but hey you could put it up front too.

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Thanks

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what do you mean?

like needs more "boom" more grabbing? maybe buy a photo off a press photo reuters?

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yeah i just noticed that hahaha, i guess i can just change the spacing around..

i also dont think chinamen really give a fuck.. they could care less about darfur and petrochina. no offence

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taking a step back and looking at them... they just seem like mehhh me to me now... something is really missing and its just text ... i dont know.. any ideas?

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Dacfur, Dakfur, Darpur, Dartur, Carfur?

I think that the highlighted text thing only works if there's the actual letters there to highlight.

In any case, SAVE CARFUR!

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none taken,

you can make darfur words to make darfur geographically. make fuck really really huge?

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thanks for all the feedback

i guess i just have to build up from this, use this as a rough idea.. i think i might buy some photos from reuters to add graphics or something

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how bout those magnetic T's, with small magnetic letter.

imagine walking though an airport, tripping the metal sensors and all hell breaking loose.

anyway, whats a genocide course? sounds interesting

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Why dont you take a trip to Darfur and really try do something.

These designs are crap. The morons that would buy them are probably people that keep petrochina in business.

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they're both really bad

I agree. It's pretty straight forward/boring.

On a side note; why the hell do you care what the design is like if its predominantly intended to be a straight-forward political message?

If you really want to make a difference hold an event, donate to a charity, or make a pilgrimage to aid in relief yourself. I hate when people put brash political statements on t-shirts. 'Statement' T-shirts and bumper stickers are people's excuses for acting like they care.

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'Statement' T-shirts and bumper stickers are people's excuses for acting like they care.

sometimes

and sometimes people walk the walk

although this may not be one of those times...

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sometimes

and sometimes people walk the walk

although this may not be one of those times...

"Free Tibet" and "Kerry/Edwards 2004" stickers haven't done much. :D

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"Free Tibet" and "Kerry/Edwards 2004" stickers haven't done much. :D

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If you really want to make a difference hold an event, donate to a charity, or make a pilgrimage to aid in relief yourself. I hate when people put brash political statements on t-shirts. 'Statement' T-shirts and bumper stickers are people's excuses for acting like they care.

first order of clothing design is to make something comfortable/functional

second is to make something that looks good

even if i did support this cause and truly care about it, i wouldn't choose buying this tee as a means of expressing myself

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